Proposal Response2

Proposal Response2 - Topic Proposal Response Worksheet Name...

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Topic Proposal Response Worksheet Name of Responder (you): Eli Quinn Name of Writer (whose paper are you responding to?): Bronchez Walls Introduction. Identify the two sentences that best engage you with the proposal’s topic or that best explain why it’s an important area of research (cut and paste them): -“I chose this topic because I love the Earth and I detest the thought of someone mistreating it.” -“In the paper I will concentrate on developing the idea that the drilling will negatively affect the animals that inhabit the Arctic.” Identify two sentences that needs work (cut and paste them): -“Animals have a special place in my heart.” -“I am especially drawn to polar bears.” Provide alternative versions of them that might work better here (revise them): -I would combine the two sentences together using a conjunction Thesis. Identify what you think is the proposal’s thesis here: -“I have several negative prejudgments about the drilling in the Arctic and it is important for me to research this topic to further my knowledge of it.” Describe what already works about the thesis. -It shows what he is willing to do if he is able to convince the reader to let him research this topic.
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