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MarzanAdam MarzanDr. Karen DolnickENGL10122 December 2016After Action Assessment: Essay 2After submitting the week five essay: Writing to Inform the instructor provided a lot ofhelpful feedback. Once again with a smiling face, it is wonderful to say, the feedback receivedwas more positive than it was negative. According to the rubric comments provided, there werefive out of six areas graded in the exemplary writing category. The sixth area graded wasGrammar and Mechanics, which fell in the accomplished category. To add on, after following thehomework plan from the first after action assessment, the areas of improvement from the firstassignment have become areas of strength for this essay.In the week five essay: Writing to Inform, there were a few minor errors in spelling andgrammar. For example, in paragraph three of the assignment, Marzan writes “Scientist from thewest examined the bones; it was concluded that the remains were from an unknown species.”

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Dr. Karen
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Plural, World Wide Web, Grammatical number, English plural, After Action Assessment Two, Adam Marzan

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