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Intro- Attention Getter Thesis- Jerry was right when he tried to disturb the universe Major points you are going to touch on. Body: What does it mean to disturb the universe? Not going with the flow and doing what people always do Why should or shouldn’t people do it? What criteria has to be in place to justify doing it? You show people you don't need to be like everyone else People will follow you Change the cycle of the normal How did Jerry disturb the universe? Didn’t sell chocolates because first because of the assignment and then to show people you didn’t have to follow what people are doing Results of his choices He seen that people actually stopping selling chocolate and kept going against what people thought People started questioning the vigils and the school Some people wanted to start doing there own thing Should he have? Yes Why or why not? Yes because people don't always need to be like everyone else and sell the chocolates. You don’t to be like everyone else Evidence/examples from the book Goober not selling the chocolates Vigil assignment Con or rebuttal he got beat up and Brother Leon didn't do anything Other real-world examples Conclusion Restate your thesis/claim Wrap up your argument/recap Some things are worth fighting for. Like Jerry in the The Chocolate War by Robert Cormier. He fought a battle that no one would because he didn’t want to sell chocolates to save
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the school even after the Vigils gave him the assignment to sell them. There is a constant debate should he have disturbed the universe and not sell any or should he just suck it up and sell them. If we are going to live in this universe we need to stand up and not always do what people want us to do. So Jerry good job not selling and disturbing the universe that people think its a way in life to sell the chocolates. No claim Disturbing the universe means getting out of the constant cycle of what people believe not wearing the same clothes as everyone else, not having the same hair cuts, or like Jerry not selling chocolates like everyone else because he doesn't want to. Jerry first got the assignment
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