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Hi Donneka, I’m going to guess Texas as the state you reside. You’re a southern bell. You’ve done a great job with your discussion post. I love your story of Mawmaw and yourself and love of mac and cheese which is one of my favorite side dishes, or a main course if spruced up broccoli and grilled chicken chucks, yum! I like how you provided a visual story, as Sykes, Malik, & West notes, that “[A] story provides a selected set of information, in a single complete picture, carefully designed to draw your audience from their starting place to the desired conclusion” (2013, p. 7). For example, the accent that was outlined in throughout the narrative, I was able to picture the excitement from when you first woke up and jumped out of the bed with excitement. I envisioned your dialogue that you and Mawmaw had and your eagerness to help with your favorite dish. Then finally I was able to experience the thrill of you seeing the Sunday dinner layout before you before just before it was time to eat. I was able to walk through your story
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