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Bella Mu 123 Log Rd Boston, MA 12345 (123) 456-7890 18th January 2019 Mich En 123 First St Boston, MA 12345 Dear Mich, I want to thank you for entrusting me to proofread your article. It is a well written article with both well-constructed sentences and an persuasive argument. However, there are a few things that you might want to take under consideration before you submit your article to the correspondent department. Without further ado, I’d like to recommend you consider and utilize the steps of the communication process: P 3 planning, packaging and perfecting. While your argument is persuasive, I suggest you do more research regarding the topic. Also, using technical jargon will overwhelm your audience, which in this case your audience is people who are not accustomed to those terms. You have already accomplished the second step of this process. You asked someone else to put some outside perspective into your article after you had already revised it yourself. Next thing is perfecting your article. Immediately after you have conducted your secondary research,
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