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Unformatted text preview: Ryan Rooney English 15 Revision Letter My Revisions Has a teacher ever told you to hand in a paper before you revise? If so do not listen to them because they should be fired right now. No paper is ever perfect with no revisions its just not possible. Before you can hand in any type of final copy you always have to make sure you revise it plenty of times to achieve a better outcome. The first thing I did was re read The Nature Faker just to make sure I was not missing any details. Then, I started my revision process by re reading my paper and changing any little things like misspelled words, sentence fragments, missed punctuation, quotes, paraphrasing, bad word usage, and final make sure my MLA format was correct. Some of the main problems I had writing this that needed to be revised was my intro and conclusion of my essay. In my first paper I did not have a strong intro or conclusion due to the lack of space. So that was the first thing I really needed to concentrate on and fix so it all blends lack of space....
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- Spring '07