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July 10 th 2007 Eng. 202D Exercises 2.1, 2.3 2.1 Ethical terms- Home equity loan- this makes it seems that it is open to anyone and that it is a positive thing, not a negative. Tax-paying hospital- this term describes the hospital as a law abiding facility, and is a fair place to be treated. User Fee- is a nice way of saying a kind of payment that is required for a service. Investment- this term makes it sound like there is a positive reason why you are paying for a service or item. Unethical terms- Price changes- this term makes it seem that there is an increase of an existing price. 2.3 1. Not all the necessary information has been provided to process your claim. This claim does not have the necessary information for processing. The passive verb example sounds better than the impersonal expression. 2. The credit card number supplied has expired.
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Unformatted text preview: The credit card number supplied on the form has expired. The passive verb example sounds better than the impersonal expression. 3. We have not received your check yet. The check for the order has not been received yet. In this case the impersonal expression sounds better than the passive verb. 4. Not all the necessary information was provided in your letter. The letter did not provide the necessary information. The passive verb example sounds better than the impersonal expression. 5. The pool in your yard has violated city regulations against health hazards. Please put up a fence around your pool. The health hazards for the city have been violated by the lack of fencing around the pool. The passive verb example sounds better than the impersonal expression....
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This note was uploaded on 03/31/2008 for the course ENGL 202D taught by Professor Crimmins,kemdavi during the Summer '07 term at Penn State.

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