ENGL 202D- Resume Revision.docx - 376 Critique My biggest...

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376 Critique: My biggest issue with this resume was the personal part because mentioning that you are single with excellent health and including your height and weight is very inappropriate and unprofessional. If this was the first thing I saw as a recruiter, I wouldn’t need to read any further because I would throw the resume out. Also, the headings and her name need to stand out more. With these 3 issues present, Sylvia wouldn’t even have a chance at getting hired no matter her qualifications because it already seems like she’s not fit for the job. S ylvia Man c hes t er 765 B ell e F l e u r B lv d. N ew O rlea n s , L A 7 0 1 1 3 Cell: ( 5 04) 3 1 2-9 5 0 4 [email protected] OBJECTIVE To ob t ain a pos i tion that will enable me to showcase my background in marketing and sales with a company that will allow me to further advance my skillset . WORK EXPERIENCE Fisher Scientific Instruments, New Orleans, LA Fie l d Sales Representative January 2014 – Present Customer Service Representative
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