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CourseBBA-305W BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS TestWriting Exercise 913.2 Radical Rewrite: Inadequate Cover Letter (L.O. 6)The following cover letter accompanies Elliana Estrada’s résumé (Radical Rewrite 13.1). Like her résumé, the cover letter needs major revision.Your Task. Analyze Elliana’s cover letter and list at least eight weaknesses. Your instructor may ask you to revise this letter before showing you an improved version.Analyze Elliana's cover letter. List at leasteight weaknesses.Selected Answer:A letter should address, person and title of company being applied forCover letter should be addressed to a personIntroduction sentence should gain the attention and be more appealing to the readerBody of paragraph should elaborate on your skill setAvoid talking about past jobs that are not relevant to the job you are seekingShould explain how your talents would benefit the companyElliana should ask for an interviewElliana should provide contact information to include cell number