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Cour se BBA-305W BUSINESS COMMUNICATIONS Test Writing Exercise 9 13.2 Radical Rewrite: Inadequate Cover Letter (L.O. 6) The following cover letter accompanies Elliana Estrada’s résumé ( Radical Rewrite 13.1 ). Like her résumé, the cover letter needs major revision. Your Task. Analyze Elliana’s cover letter and list at least eight weaknesses. Your instructor may ask you to revise this letter before showing you an improved version. Analyze Elliana's cover letter. List at least eight weaknesses. Selecte d Answer: A letter should address, person and title of company being applied for Cover letter should be addressed to a person Introduction sentence should gain the attention and be more appealing to the reader Body of paragraph should elaborate on your skill set Avoid talking about past jobs that are not relevant to the job you are seeking Should explain how your talents would benefit the company Elliana should ask for an interview Elliana should provide contact information to include cell number

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