module7editing (1).doc - Module 7 Editing Exercise The following business letter contains around 30 intentional errors in sentence structure spelling

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Module 7 Editing Exercise The following business letter contains around 30 intentional errors in sentence structure, spelling, proofreading, plural nouns, possessive nouns, and pronouns. When you revise a comma splice, run-on, or fragment, the changes count as two edits. Delete these instructions before submitting. BENSON BROTHERS MANAGEMENT SERVICES 3328 Big Mesa Road Scottsdale, AZ 85042 (602) 358-2249 E-mail: [email protected] Web: November 30, 20119 Ms. Sonia Lopez 2320 Navajo Road Phoenix, AZ 84690 Dear Mr. Lopez: My partner and myself are certin that our rental management service can help you care for your fathers-in-law apartment complex in Scottsdale, here are answers to your questions. To manage a clients rental units, our team keeps their charges as low as possible. Every house, rental, and condo operates under the same low fee schedule for their services. We charge 10 percent of all fees collected. In addition, we will advertise whenever a unit becomes vacant. We charge an additional 10 percent on the first years

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