Unit 3 Revision Memo - English 1320.docx - Nowakowski 1 Ally Nowakowski Mr Paramo English 1320 22 October 2018 Revision Memo After rereading my research

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Nowakowski 1 Ally Nowakowski Mr. Paramo English 1320 22 October 2018 Revision Memo After rereading my research paper as well as reviewing the comments on it, it became clear to me that the claims I make in my research paper seem to be general and require a greater amount of elaborations and examples to further enhance my work. Facebook and other similar social media websites can respond to the issue of privacy through promoting user cognizance of data usage policies. In addition, they can exercise less control over user privacy by giving the power to consumers, who are sharing their information on social media websites. Facebook already claims to grant users full control of this, but has been involved in numerous data dissemination instances in recent years, all due to their loose control over private information that can so easily leak to the public domain. To truly fix privacy regulation issues, Facebook needs to keep users aware of data usage and refrain from its own
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