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ASSESSMENT TASK 1: HEALTH RATIONALE Student Name Student Number Tutor Joyance Ting 33207185 Marking schema N (0-49) Fail (POOR) P (50-59) Pass CTORY) C (60-69) Credit OOD) D (70-79) Distinction D) HD(80-100) Distinction Part A: Content (30) Defined health priority and clearly explained the relationship of priority to concepts of wellbeing. Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Student established the relevance of their topic to the CURRENT health priority areas in a specific context Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Student provided a thorough overview of the key debates and issues around their topic Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Described the health determinants of this issue, including the risk factors Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Considered more than one dimension, element or construct of wellbeing in the overview Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Student made it clear the target group for the particular focus of the health priority and argued a case for this in the rationale Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Health promotion actions and strategies with examples to address the issue to improve health outcomes for stakeholders are suggested and discussed Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Applies fundamentals of Ottawa Charter Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Critical analysis justifies the need for health promotion in the chosen area of health Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Evidence of relevant and peer reviewed research and statistics Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng
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Part B: Style/Presentation (5) POOR (0-2.25) SATISFACT ORY (2.5-2.75) GOOD (3.0- 3.25) VERY GOOD (3.5-3.75) OUTSTANDI NG (4.0-5.0) Academic essay format (introduction, thesis statement body paragraphs and conclusion) Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Layout of rationale and argument is logical, coherent and persuasive Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Fluency of writing, grammar and punctuation Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Referencing (APA) in text citations including direct quotes and paraphrasing and reference list Poor Satisfact ory☐ Good Very Good Outstandi ng Word count (1,500 words +/- 10%) Poor (+/-over 30%) Satisfact ory (+/-25- 30%) Good (+/- 20%) Very Good (+/- 10%) Outstandi ng (+/- 50 words) Final Mark /35 Comments
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Assessment Task 1 Persuasive Essay Present a 1500-word persuasive essay for a selected (evidence-based) national health priority area from a country of your choice using the following question as a starting point: “Why is your topic a national health priority area and how is this being addressed?” Introduction Mental health is a major medical and social issue that is on the rise and has taken over globally.
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