Unformatted text preview: explain the point I’m trying to get across in a way that I cannot do from simply analysing a paper. Even though it was not perfect, it was what I enjoy most about writing: the personal touch. It greatly disappoints me when I am inhibited from doing this. And I understand that there will be specific assignments that will require my own insights, I would much rather be able to use them when I feel that it is needed. After all was said and done, I ended up removing a paragraph entirely. Although I did not follow the form, I did make a number of changes to better fit the purpose of the lesson. Although, I’m still not even close to satisfied with the result. Sincerely, Brady Kaelin...
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- Fall '19