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Madison VonaCollege CompositionMs. Williams 5 November 2019Peer Review: Mercedes Davis’s Argumentative EssayIntroductionI would narrow the introduction to one question. If you ask too many questions in an opening paragraph, readers may be overwhelmed by them and might not want to read the rest of the essay. However, I do like the question idea! Your thesis is not clearly stated in your introduction paragraph. At the end of your introduction, make sure you state your reasons as to why you disagree with the phone policy and then further explain them in your body paragraphs. Assignment SpecificationsYour essay followed the guidelines that were given, however you needed more than one resource and you only cited one. You explained your opinions very well in your body paragraphs, however you need to make sure you state your reasons in a thesis statement that way the readers know what they are going to be reading about.

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