Reflection 1.docx - Reflection 1 Some of the things I learned while either reading out loud today or while listening to others share their stories was

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Reflection 1 Some of the things I learned while either reading out loud today or while listening to others share their stories was we all think the essays that we wrote are much worse than they actually are. Also, I learned that when I read my story to my group I was able to mentally fix the things that I did wrong in my paper like improper grammar or simply pulling out and adding words that I didn’t think fit very well where they were in the sentence. For my project I need to figure out how to expand some of the things I wrote about without getting too off topic but also not boring the crap out of the person who is forced to read my essay. I think I want to tell more stories but I’m not entirely sure if that is the purpose of this. I don’t know if I should talk more
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Unformatted text preview: about how friendship affects me or if I should talk more about how friendship can affect the lives of others. Also, I need to find a better way to conclude my essay because it is way too short and also, I think it is kind of abrupt and the story doesn’t flow well into the conclusion. One of the other things that I learned while sharing today was that all of our essays, or at least the people who shared, are based off of a similar basis. The topics may be different but they are all centered around the concept of love and caring whether it be for a sport a community or people you know....
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