Unformatted text preview: about how friendship affects me or if I should talk more about how friendship can affect the lives of others. Also, I need to find a better way to conclude my essay because it is way too short and also, I think it is kind of abrupt and the story doesn’t flow well into the conclusion. One of the other things that I learned while sharing today was that all of our essays, or at least the people who shared, are based off of a similar basis. The topics may be different but they are all centered around the concept of love and caring whether it be for a sport a community or people you know....
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- Spring '16