Unformatted text preview: in past tense and it should be an easy fix. It will let the reader know the experiment was actually performed by me. The flow of the report will be consistent and easier to understand. Finally, there are a few big idea sections that I left out of the report. For example, the hypothesis and objectives of the project. I will need to add them without sounding redundant. One peer review pointed out that I should remove the last paragraph of my introduction because it sounded redundant to the procedure section. I will revise to see if I feel necessary to shift that section around....
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- Fall '08