project 1 revision plan.docx - Katelyn Cisneros CHM2045-L-908 Project 1 Revision Plan October 7 2018 My lab report can be improved in a couple of ways

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Katelyn Cisneros CHM2045-L-908 Project 1 Revision Plan October 7, 2018 My lab report can be improved in a couple of ways. After peer review, I received feedback to make my result tables more clear, check my grammar, add in missing sections, and editing the introduction. First, I will begin with the table in the results section. I will split this table into two weeks of tests. I will also add in the conductivity results that were forgotten as well. The final results section should become more clear. You will be able to see the tests that were run in week one and week two. Next, I will go through the document and check the grammar of everything. It should be
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Unformatted text preview: in past tense and it should be an easy fix. It will let the reader know the experiment was actually performed by me. The flow of the report will be consistent and easier to understand. Finally, there are a few big idea sections that I left out of the report. For example, the hypothesis and objectives of the project. I will need to add them without sounding redundant. One peer review pointed out that I should remove the last paragraph of my introduction because it sounded redundant to the procedure section. I will revise to see if I feel necessary to shift that section around....
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