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Experience Evaluation Peer Review
Shows engaging Scene of Participation in experience
Gives background info / research as well as Prior Knowledge
Discusses assumptions + is not a list of criteria
Paragraphs detailing experience are well developed
|Thes is needs to be clearly stated at end of lead
improvelead Wake the overview flow better by adding
Add more detail on what you expected to be there , etc
Explore load Present a clear thesis stating evaluation at the end of
How would you rate this experience as a whole
criteria Provided is
Sections Separated clearly + neatly.
Definitions need more detail and explanation
organized comprehensively in Paragraphs for each criterion
Maybe explain what a chip does and why that is
helpful to be provided
" good in your criteria ;
Try not to say "
choose another adjective that defines " good
Provide more detail in explanations
and definitions relating to your experience
How does your criteria relate to your overall
experience and evaluation of your experience?
could be more comprehensive evaluation
Details are Specific but need to be more Showing
fails to include evaluation of experience
Other perspectives are present but helds more detail
Add more showing details about your race to
go along with your criteria .
Add a specific evaluation for
each criter a .
Talk more about the perspective of
other racers and
where the organization fell Short .
Would you consider this to be an e
of evaluation experience, why or why not ?
Includes one image showing course online
Image is referenced and corresponds to text
Add an image for each criteria
Not fully developed and comprehensive
No reccomendations and is a restatement
Give a number evaluation for your rating
further develop as a whole and add
Would you reccomend anyone to come to this event, or
Specific people ?
some Places could be more Sophisticated
Minor issues with Proofreading/errors
| Correct MLA format with accurate handings
Proofread and see what you can change to make paper move
check for spaces and grammatical errors in text
WI - D
fix awkward Sentences into multiple clear sentences...
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- Fall '17