Feedback from friend.docx - Surname 1 Article Critique When it Snows is a piece that showcases the author's creativity It is written in primary language

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Surname 1 Article Critique When it Snows is a piece that showcases the author's creativity. It is written in primary language that makes it easy for any literate person to read. Narrated in a short story version, the article utilized various themes and setting to develop his story. However, the author presents his story in an ambiguous manner with a lurking flow that makes it difficult for the readers to understand. Reading through the story, despite its creative plot, the story is told in a less captivating way considering it does not excite the emotions of the reader. The critique of the article will focus principally on its setting, scope, genre, themes, and the style. The story’s main themes are poverty and friendship. In the opening paragraph, the
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Unformatted text preview: author brings us into the different lives of two friends. Although the article is a creative piece in regards to its plot, it lurks greatly in its transitioning and flow. Each transitioning seems to be hanging, which leaves the readers with lesser information on the events. The author should articulate his story in an excellently written form by avoiding jumping from one point to another. While the story is written in basic English, the authors, sentence structuring is wanting. The author needs to improve on the sentence structuring and employ the use of vocabulary to excite the readers and make the story less boring....
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