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Unformatted text preview: GM410 – Foundations of Professional Communication Editing Exercise 4 – Sentence Logic (Modifier Placement and Parallelism) and Wordiness Please save this document with the name “e4 your last name,” complete the exercise, and post it in the Week 5 Editing Exercise 4 Dropbox by midnight Sunday. Sentence Logic – Modifier Placement and Parallelism Please consult the indicated sections in Appendix A, Peak Performance, and Editing Exercise 1, and then correct the problems with modifier placement or parallelism in the sentences that follow. There are no correct sentences. I - Problems with parallel structure (Appendix A #11; PP – Sentences - Sentence Problems - Lack of Parallelism) J - Misplaced modifiers (Appendix A #12; PP – Sentences - Sentence Problems - Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers) 1. Opening the window to let out a pesky fly, the car accidentally swerved onto the shoulder of the road. - J While opening the window to let out a pesky fly, the car accidentally swerved onto the shoulder of...
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This note was uploaded on 07/12/2009 for the course CIS MA324 taught by Professor J.albright during the Spring '09 term at Dominican.
- Spring '09