David's Draft - clean off the walls. You can put the items...

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Directions: Read this rough draft of an email your colleague plans to send later this week. Identify its strengths and weaknesses. Then re-write the message to help it be more effective. Don’t forget the subject line! Subject : Get Ready! We are hoping to be back at work soon, with everything running smoothly, same production schedule and no late projects or missed deadlines. So you need to clean out your desk, put your stuff in boxes, and
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Unformatted text preview: clean off the walls. You can put the items you had up on your walls in boxes, also. We have provided boxes. The move will happen this weekend. Well be in our new offices when you arrive on Monday. We will not be responsible for personal belongings during the move. David Burke...
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