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Evaluation report on “the proposal ‘Power Bank Bracelet That Can Help Save Our Mother Earth”Introduction This report is an evaluation of the proposal ‘Power Bank Bracelet That Can Help Save Our Mother Earth’ submitted for a technopreneurship competition by School of Computer Engineering, Nanyang Technological University. Said proposal is adapted from Peh, J and Fang, Y, written in 2014Description The proposal aims to promote and provide information about a newly designed power bank bracelet targeted at the female market. Compared to existing products, this bracelet is much more portable due to its light weight and design, and much better for the environment due to using sustainable environmental technology. Objective The goal of this evaluation is to vet whether the proposal is written properly based on the strength of arguments made, clarity of writing, and language used. Evaluation First, the arguments used in the proposal are not supported sufficiently. Some arguments were not sound, lack proper evaluation, and fallacies were used. The authors stated that recharging power banks

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