ENG1B_ExtraCred2.docx - Syed 1 ENGL1B Extra Credit Journal#2 I\u2019ve been meaning to write this journal not for the sake of extra credit but as an

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Syed 1 ENGL1B Extra Credit Journal #2 I’ve been meaning to write this journal not for the sake of extra credit but as an evaluation of my own mistakes in both of the essays submitted in the class, in the hopes of maybe being able to catch my mistakes. One of the key points that I ended up making a mistake of both times were my comma splices error. I still remember during the drafting day for essay 1, I went to the professor and asked him as to how I would reduce my comma splice errors since it was the only major problem in my previous English classes as well. Learning after my first essay my main goal was to start a head of time rather than leave everything at the last minute. I was able to find out much improvements made especially in the entire structure in essay 2 as well as the transitioning. During my first essay the professor pointed out that I lacked balance between the summary portion of the essay and my own analysis. To combat that I decided to have my essay proofread by someone else, something I had not done for my previous essay. After having
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