Wordiness handout

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paula.gillespie@mu.edu in a very real sense In a very real sense, the drainage problems caused the house to collapse. The drainage problems caused the house to collapse. factor The project’s final cost was an essential factor to consider. The project’s final cost was essential to consider. manner The child touched the snake in a reluctant manner. The child touched the snake reluctantly. nature His comment was of an offensive nature. His comment was offensive. type of Gordon took a relaxing type of vacation. Gordon took a relaxing vacation. seems It seems that the union called a strike over health benefits. The union called a strike over health benefits. tendency The team had a tendency to lose home games. The team often lost home games. in the process of We are in the process of reviewing the proposal. We are reviewing the proposal. exist The crime rate that exists is unacceptable. The crime rate is
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This note was uploaded on 09/16/2009 for the course BIOL 1001 taught by Professor Mynlieff during the Fall '08 term at Marquette.

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