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Unformatted text preview: exclamation points were inserted midway through paragraphs. Subject Matter The body of the e-mail did not match the subject line, the e-mail simply said that there would be amazing offers on the next page. Improvements Although this e-mail is from a spammer there are ways to improve it which would have elicited a better response from the recipient (in this case myself). These include An introduction Proper spelling and grammar Description of what the actual job is A closing sentence A signoff from who the e-mail is from...
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This note was uploaded on 09/20/2009 for the course H ADM 165 taught by Professor Csnow during the Fall '08 term at Cornell University (Engineering School).
- Fall '08