Unformatted text preview: Multiple times throughout the paper I had sentences that ran on for many lines. These sentences had more than one idea and sometimes even more than one subject. By adding commas, periods, and semi-colons in the appropriate places my sentences made a lot more sense. After these minor but significant changes, my paper was ready for portfolio. I found this paper very easy to write because all of the information was given to me by Josh. After revising, it seems that I rushed through the paper and made a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes. I really thought the transitions in my paper flowed well from paragraph to paragraph. The conclusion of this paper really summed up the whole thing. It related back to the introduction and it was where I tied up a lot of loose ends. I think this is the strongest paper I have written this semester; I just wish I would had turned it in on time!...
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This essay was uploaded on 04/07/2008 for the course PHI 114 taught by Professor Faris during the Spring '08 term at Purdue.
- Spring '08