WendyEller-Assignment-Unit 7

WendyEller-Assignment-Unit 7 - Persuasive Essay Feedback...

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Persuasive Essay Feedback 1 Persuasive Essay Feedback Feedback Memorandum for Brandy Beeman’s Persuasive Essay Wendy Eller Kaplan University Professor April Burge CM 225-04 AU December 01, 2009
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Persuasive Essay Feedback 2 To: Brandy Beeman From: Wendy Eller, Fellow Classmate Date: December 01, 2009 Subject: Persuasive Essay Feedback During my recent review of your persuasive essay, I found many strengths and good points. I would like to discuss a couple of these things further with you. For instance, in paragraph 1, I am glad that you brought up where the ethical responsibility lies within the trucking company. You have mentioned not only the drivers, but the dispatchers as well. I think this is an important factor in determining solutions to the unethical behavior taking place. If the company does not decide to adapt the new paperless log system, knowing this factor will help determine alternative solutions to the issues at hand. Next, in paragraph 2, I have noticed you explained how the paperless log system will work once
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This note was uploaded on 12/08/2009 for the course CM 225-04 taught by Professor Burge during the Fall '09 term at Kaplan University.

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WendyEller-Assignment-Unit 7 - Persuasive Essay Feedback...

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