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PeerResponse - Peer Response Michael Kjome Dear Casey Wern...

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Peer Response Michael Kjome Dear Casey Wern I was very intrigued by your topic. I found it very interesting even though I would have never chosen to write about it. While I was reading your paper I found myself looking back on mine and thinking how I could add more depth like you had. The way that you wrote your opinion seemed very inviting, as if you were speaking directly to me. The sources you use seem to be both credible and relevant as well as the personal experience you have included. You seem to have a very clear position. It rings through the entire writing of you paper and does not go off topic. The conclusion that you have written is a nice ending to the very personal paper you wrote. The role of sex and media and the role of media and children is an interesting point to leave us on and makes me think of your paper long after I read it. The arguments that you present in the paper are relevant to the thesis you have. You use persona experience to reference the point you are trying to make and I think that
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