BUS 210 Business Communications e-mail_correction

BUS 210 Business Communications e-mail_correction - Yes,...

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"I wanted to welcome you ASAP to our little family here in the States. It's high time we shook hands in person and not just across the sea. I'm pleased as punch about getting to know you all, and I for one will do my level best to sell you on America." The e-mail can be modified as: “I wanted to welcome you as soon as possible to our little family here in the United States. It's high time we shook hands in person and not just across the sea. I'm very pleased about getting to know you all, and I for one will do my level best to make you like America.”
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Unformatted text preview: Yes, this message needs to be audience centered because since, the clients belong to Hong Kong, they may not be aware of the local jargons used in the United States. The e-mail should be one that can be easily apprehended by the clients. Use of jargons makes the comprehension of a particular message tough, particularly if the clients will not be able to understand the meanings of the term ASAP, and the phrases pleased as punch and sell you on. The message should be clear to the audience, and should not contain any ambiguity....
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