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Nichelle James St.Helen Week 1 Writing Assignment 1 Dr. Sandra Price April 20, 2009 OM304: WEEK 1 WRITING ASSIGNMENT 1  Rewrite the following sentences to show audience benefit with a “you” approach and a  positive tone.  1. We are happy to say that deliveries can now be made on the first of each week.  Your deliveries can now be made at the first of each week. 2. Our firm prides itself on its high-quality women’s wear, known throughout the  West as “the store for style-conscious women.”  You are the reason our firm prides itself on its high-quality women’s wear, known  throughout the West as “the store for style-conscious women.” 3. We have been in business for 30 years—and we’re proud of it! 
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The reason we have been in business for 30 proud years is you! 4. We would like you to inspect our quality line of china, some of which is imported 
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