Week1.WrAss2 - NichelleJamesSt.Helen Dr.SandraPrice April20,2009 OM304: Rewrite(oredit). forvividwriting 1.

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Nichelle James St.Helen Week 1 Writing Assignment 2 Dr. Sandra Price April 20, 2009 OM304: WEEK 1 WRITING ASSIGNMENT 2  Rewrite (or edit) the following sentences using the active voice  . This voice is preferred  for vivid writing.  1. A company credit card was used by the manager to purchase office supplies. The manager purchased office supplies with a company credit card. 2. To protect students, laws were passed in many states that prohibited the use of  social security numbers as identification.  Laws were passed in many states to protect students that prohibited the use of  social security numbers as identification.  3. Checks are processed more quickly by banks because of new regulations.  The banks process checks more quickly because of new regulations. 
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4. Millions of packages are scanned by FedEx every night as packages stream  through its Memphis hub. 
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Week1.WrAss2 - NichelleJamesSt.Helen Dr.SandraPrice April20,2009 OM304: Rewrite(oredit). forvividwriting 1.

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