kdd.docx - Client I have started reading over this new version and to be honest I still see several editorial mistakes At any rate the editorial

kdd.docx - Client I have started reading over this new...

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Client: I have started reading over this new version and to be honest I still see several editorial mistakes. At any rate. the editorial standard of the text is something you need to check and make sure is well covered. It is important to correct the language so that clarity is not affected. But the key think is the changes to theory and methodology that you have made in this version, and the problems I told you about in my last email. I am not able to read each single updated new version of the draft, especially if the problems seem to recur. The bibliography is still in need of editorial correction (full references and consistent referencing style); Systematic reviews provide objective summaries of what has been written and found out about re need to put the ref list in order b) there is still a lot of unclarity as to the research questions and purposes. A lot of this is due to the lack of specific definitions of the key terms going into them . I have suggested some way forward, but you need to look into this more.
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