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Unformatted text preview: bunch of different sentence rules in my previous essay. This revision improved my essay by eliminating general discussion of rules because now I am only talking about one rule, which is what youre looking for. In the original essay, I wrote This also includes using active verbs, not omitting needed words, using proper modifiers, emphasizing what is intended, and having variety in what is said or written. In this revised essay, I wrote The most important rule is to avoid ambiguous or remote pronoun reference. I gave many reasons as to why this rule is important in the sentences that follow....
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This note was uploaded on 02/08/2010 for the course RSRU 10000 taught by Professor Miller during the Spring '09 term at Fordham.
- Spring '09