Unformatted text preview: bunch of different sentence rules in my previous essay. This revision improved my essay by eliminating general discussion of rules because now I am only talking about one rule, which is what you’re looking for. In the original essay, I wrote “This also includes using active verbs, not omitting needed words, using proper modifiers, emphasizing what is intended, and having variety in what is said or written.” In this revised essay, I wrote “The most important rule is to avoid ambiguous or remote pronoun reference.” I gave many reasons as to why this rule is important in the sentences that follow....
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- Spring '09
- Bedford, Cecilia Li Professor