Elisa_Influential

Elisa_Influential - Elisa Lopez English 198/Environment 100...

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Unformatted text preview: Elisa Lopez English 198/Environment 100 1 Influential Figure Rough Draft No Your thesis did a good job summarizing what is expected to be in the book. However, the sentence is a little hard to follow. Sounds a little ankward in structure. Perhaps you can break into 2 sentences. You said that it continues to be imperative which made me think that it has already significant. If so, how did it achieve that status prior to the recent days(where you talked about technology and climate talks) Responsible for what? I find it awkward to have this after the introduction of the book (last paragraph). Maybe move it before the 2 nd paragraph. other novel, newspaper article or literary piece could have busted open wide the door to the environmental movement while simultaneously exposing the passive aggressive attempts by incessant polluters to commit iniquitous actions in a hushed fashion, than Rachel Carsons renowned, Silent Spring. Coalescing her two passions, writing and natural science (biology), Carson inputs not only her expertise, but utilizes her talent for communication to produce such an effective piece of literature, that it has become elementary to the way in which scientists, students, lawmakers and citizens of the world...
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