Unformatted text preview: explanation to those points. Another thing that my final paper improved compare to the first draft is the introduction. I think I did make it more interesting and easy to follow rather than the first one. All the revisions that I made contribute to the clarity of my paper and depth of analysis for the issue, which is very important. 2. One of the most proud aspect in my paper was quote-integration....
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