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Amy Callaway English 3700 Dr. Rausch Workshop B1 Savage Evolution Once again I loved your story. I enjoy how easily you are able to jump genres. I enjoy science fiction mostly because it keeps me thinking about things I will never be able to fully understand. Kevin’s design seems to be quite elaborate but for no further purpose than to see if a bird man could be made. What were the scientist hoping to learn from Kevin or was he merely for entertainment purposes I would like so more description about the wings Kevin had. It is mentioned that they are not quite like a birds and I imagine him having large angel wings but I was hoping for something much different. Louise is obviously attractive based on the guards reactions, did the scientist control her features during her birth process? How much control do they have over their experiments? He mentions he can fly but only short distances. What kind of inner turmoil does this create for Kevin? As he taught himself to fly may be he does not realize what he is missing out on. Why was Kevin allowed to teach himself to fly but Louise being around the same age be taught by someone else five years after that person learned. Kevin and Louise quickly attach to each other which can be easily qualified because they
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This note was uploaded on 02/15/2010 for the course ENGLISH 5000 taught by Professor M during the Spring '10 term at Armstrong State University.

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