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The feedback from my instructor involved using back-to-back references from the same sources. I had mainly used two sources for my paper and seemed to group these two sources together. I did not notice that I had done this with my sources and I am going to try to break up the sources within my paper with some information from other sources. I think I can improve my expository essay by using more sources to ensure that my paper is as accurate as possible. Using secondary sources will also help me to expand my knowledge on Polynesian tattooing and give me more information to use in my essay. Breaking up the sources within my paper will make my paper seem less like I am getting all of my information on one point from one source. A variety of sources will also make my paper more solid and believable. I will conduct more research to find more credible sources to use in my essay. Since I did not submit an assignment on time, I did not receive a peer review from one of classmates. I still wanted to get feedback from a peer, so I submitted my paper to a fellow
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course AXIA crt 205 taught by Professor Tracyclaire during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet.

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