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com150_appendix_g[1] - Appendix G Peer Review Checklist*...

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Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? This essay is about the differences in men and women when buying cars. The main point in the essay is that there are gender biases when buying cars and that the issue has been recognized and is being dealt with by manufacturers and dealers, but this is not what the thesis states. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of this essay is that the essay topic is very interesting and original. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. The introduction did grab my interest and made me want to read on. I was interested in the topic and I was curious how the author was going to continue. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The thesis does not seem to fit the main point of the essay. The thesis states that there are differences in expectations, preparation methods and results between men and women
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course AXIA crt 205 taught by Professor Tracyclaire during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet.

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