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Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Brittany R Class:Eng 125 - 013 Assignment: Essay # 3 Draft # 2 Date:11/2/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? The most common stereotype used to describe Americans is that they’re fat, overweight, and morbidly obese. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I think you should say the word most common assumption, because there is no way you can prove that. Try saying “one of the most” or something along those terms. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. FDA- Very good evidence but I think that you should provide more analysis than just the amount stated in the quote. I know it would be kind of redundant but maybe try and phrase it in a different way.
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