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Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Akhil Kher Class:Eng 125- 013 Assignment: Essay # 4 Draft # 2 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? In order to increase ridership for public transit services, bus far should be reduced for passengers and more convenient bus route should be implemented. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I think the thesis should include more about Detroit since the sentence before talks about it. Maybe name some problems specifically to the city of Detroit and the changes you plan to make. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. Global Warming and Carbon Emissions – I think this is an excellent point but I don’t see where you are taking this idea. I understand you are saying that cars produce a lot of emissions but don’t buses also? Im not
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