I first started off this essay

I first started off - more specific I also tried to focus more in the intention of the director rather than what the audience felt like The peer

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Dear D’Anne I first started off this essay, with a clear thesis and mindset on how to approach the essay. I had my two specific examples and I felt like I understood the documentary well. When I first wrote the draft I didn’t pay attention to my wording or spelling because I cut and paste a lot of the paragraphs around and everything got jumbled up. But when I sat down to finalize my draft I corrected all of those mistakes and make my examples
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Unformatted text preview: more specific. I also tried to focus more in the intention of the director rather than what the audience felt like. The peer reviews helped a lot because from seeing so many other viewpoint helped me to pick which ones worked best in my essay. I liked getting workshopped and I would definitely want to do that again. Thanks, Sushanth...
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course WE 123 taught by Professor 23 during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet, Aarhus.

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