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Unformatted text preview: Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Jing Guo Class: English 125 Assignment: Essay # 3 Draft # 2 Date: 11/2/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? Today the stereotype that considers men as the dominant sex still exists in many aspects of the society; therefore, the assumption that females are less capable f high power executive positions survives. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. Nope the thesis seems fine. You just need to include the so what factor. Explain why the assumption is bad in your thesis. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. History of Woman – gives examples of how woman have slowly progressed throughout history to where they are 1....
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course WE 123 taught by Professor 23 during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet, Aarhus.
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