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Unformatted text preview: Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Kyle Schram Class: Eng 125 -013 Assignment: Essay # 3 Draft # 2 Date: How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? A commonly held assumption in our society is that whites and institutions in America are still racist toward blacks today. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. No I think this is better than the first essay because you provide information in your introduction, which explains your thesis. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. Slavery/Constitution- this was a good background because it cut down on the amount of historical evidence. I still 1....
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course WE 123 taught by Professor 23 during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet, Aarhus.
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