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Unformatted text preview: Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Kyle Schram Class: Eng 125-013 Assignment: Essay # 3 Draft 1 Date:11/2/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? A commonly held assumption in our society is that whites and institutions in America are still racist toward blacks today. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. Yes, the thesis definitely needs to be narrowed down a lot more. Focus on either a specific time period or a certain aspect of the racism. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. Slavery/Constitution/Civil War/Civil Rights –Provides a lot of factual information but there is no analysis on your 1....
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