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Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Lauren Sposta Class:English 125 Assignment: Draft # 2 Essay # 3 Date:11/9/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? Consequently, many people believe that all of U of M students are interacting with all different kinds of people on a day-to-day basis. However, although there are students with many different backgrounds, Greek life at the University of Michigan is vastly divided by race. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I don’t think the thesis needs to be narrowed any more but I think more information about Greek life should be put into your introduction because the Greek life part of your thesis just seems random. I see what your trying to do just include come more about Greek Life in your thesis. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary)
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