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Unformatted text preview: Peer Review Worksheet Reviewers name: Sushanth Boda Papers Author: Nicholas E Class:Eng 125 - 013 Assignment: Essay # 3 Draft # 2 Date:11/2/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Authors thesis ? This attitude that older individuals have no older positive influence on society results from reason such as them collecting social security for not working. However, many of the most influential people in the history of the world have made significant impacts when they were considered well past their prime. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I dont think you need to include the part about social security in your thesis. Then combine both sentences into one because the ideas flow together....
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