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Peer Review Worksheet Reviewer’s name: Sushanth Boda Paper’s Author: Pauline Chen Class:Eng 125-013 Assignment: Essay # 4 Drat # 1 Date: 11/25/09 How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Author’s thesis ? Swine Flu is quickly circulating the U of M campus, affecting many students and staff. In order to promote the safety of the campus, we need to require all U of M students to obtain the H1N1 vaccine. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I think you might you want specifically include your proposal in your thesis. Possibly say like how you are going to make sure every U of M student gets his or her shot. Like making a petition or talking to the president of UHS or something along those lines. What is the first piece of
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