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Unformatted text preview: Peer Review Worksheet Reviewers name: Sushanth Boda Papers Author: Akhil Kher Class:Eng 125-013 Assignment: Essay # 3, Draft # 1 Date: How interesting is the title ? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work What is the Authors thesis ? Middle Easterners, however, come from a variety of backgrounds and religions, not just Islam, and most of them do not show unpatriotic acts. This belief has started after the terroristic attacks of 9/11 that have scared Americans in falsely believing such ideas. Does thesis need to be narrowed to make it more specific or interesting? If so, offer a suggestion. I think you should be more specific and narrow your thesis to just Muslims or middle easterners because you mention it in your thesis but you never really expand on that thought later in your essay. What is the first piece of evidence is presented? How well does this evidence support the thesis? (repeat for each piece of evidence. Use additional paper if necessary) 1. ExpressIndia gives an alarming statistic in the jump of hate crimes against Muslims. This definitely supports 1....
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This note was uploaded on 02/16/2010 for the course WE 123 taught by Professor 23 during the Spring '10 term at Aarhus Universitet, Aarhus.
- Spring '10