Unformatted text preview: central theme of a story to this extent. • Using adjectives like “cool” are ambiguous to the reader. Define cool or possibly use a different means of description • I felt you had a tendency to insert quotations that drew away from the stories progression. That type of reinforcement I feel belongs in essays more than fictional stories. • The middle dragged and I feel if the length was condensed this problem would be alleviated with ease....
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- Spring '10
- Short story, The Reader, Steven McCommon, Max Weissler