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Unformatted text preview: Why did she react the way she did? Who was he? Your writing was at best in the beginning and end, but the middle could use some fleshing out. The ending seemed a little over the top and didn’t serve to put the reader at ease. Foreshadowing could help clear up the ambiguity shrouding the ending. With some simple adjusting this story can be a great fiction story....
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This note was uploaded on 02/19/2010 for the course GT dr2334 taught by Professor Bobsanchez during the Spring '10 term at University of Kelaniya.
- Spring '10