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Unformatted text preview: List at least 2 things you like about it. Is the introduction engaging to the reader ? If not so much, how can it be strengthened? Is the main idea (thesis) clearly stated in one sentence ? If not, how can it be improved? Name at least 2 places where the author supports his/her main idea with evidence ( direct quotes from the text, cited MLA style). Does the author define all terms used? If not, what is missing? Does the conclusion effectively close the essay? Why or why not? In what ways can this essay be improved? List one more thing the writer can work on....
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This note was uploaded on 02/24/2010 for the course EXP 201-021 taught by Professor Schneider during the Spring '10 term at Bentley.
- Spring '10